Here is another little story from Cracked Flash – this one was a runner up.
Migratory Blues
By Sara Codair
They unfurled their wings, shifted their weight and lifted off the rotting branch. Fuz smiled as the north wind hit their face. It was damp and mild, a sure sign spring had arrived in mid-regions. Circling high above the mud-sodden earth, they searched for one last southern meal.
They dove when they spotted slow movement – a tiny rodent whose legs were getting sucked in with every step. Within in seconds, the little critter was in Fuz’s claws, being carried back to the their nest.
After a hearty, albeit muddy meal, Fuz sprayed the nest with their scent and flew north.
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Three days later, Fuz arrived to the mid realms, only to find the ground there had already turned to claw sucking mud. Their stomach grumbled as they circled over mud and water. They plucked an eel out of a pond and perched on a damp rock to eat it, but it wriggled all the way down.
Each year, it seemed the mid-realms spring got closer to that of the southern realms.
Fuz signed, flapped their tired wings and was airborne once again, hoping the north was having an early spring too, or else he would freeze to death.
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Touching down in the north, Fuz was glad to have solid ground beneath their claw’s. The sun was shining, and prey animals were scurrying about – a living buffet. They feasted on rodents, lizards and insects until their belly felt like it would burst. Then they found a solid tree branch – one they noted was still devoid of leaves, and sprawled out for a nap in the sun.
Later, the howling wind woke them. The sun was gone, and frost coated the edges of their feathers and beak. They stood, struggling to take off, but the wind was too strong and cold.
I had a bit of trouble understanding if this was one bird or a flock of birds… 🙂
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It was one that was neither male nor female, so I was using “they” as a neutral pronoun, but I can see why you got confused.
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Yes, I considered that, but figured you’d have used “it” then, when it was an animal. We do need a gender-neutral words for these scenarios! 😉
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It makes things feel too much like objects. I wanted to humanize it. There are other gender neutral pronouns, like Ze, Xe and Ey. Last time I wrote a story using ey, people thought my key board was broken. LOL
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I’ve only ever seen Xe used… but yeah, I’ve had troubles with gender-neutral characters as well 🙂
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They don’t get used enough in writing. Sometimes I would prefer to not be referred to as “she” but the thought of trying to explain gender neutral pronouns to people makes my head spin. Writing is one way that I hope they can be normalized.
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